JuJu Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 [mental penetration] We manifest our desires with the quiet fire of loves eloquence, with confessions as our comfort food or medicine. Warm words welcome the third eye, our soul windows... those mornings we lay greetings like fresh pillows. Daring declarations dripping with anxious truths undressing lies, we bury our fears & they bear fruit. Bathing in your laugher as it washes my sins We unpack our burdens, & new life begins old wounds bandaged with the bonds of our bravery hypothetical situations propositioned playfully sanctified syllables burn metal to gold mentally adrift, on Isis' kiss, her wings unfold souls as oceans, & heart beats break the surface our vibrations reflect the sun in worship stirring butterflies with the bittersweet fantasies fumble frantically to free our aching flesh asking without questions & we saying yes penetrating eternities before we undress -Hiro 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modd Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 This is nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fairy Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 I like this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dequeen Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 I find this on a way higher frequency than I currently operate. We should discuss the in-depth meaning of this poem some time. It fascinates me. Good job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted November 29, 2015 Moderators Share Posted November 29, 2015 I agree... I have read this for the umpteenth time and I still feel there's more to it (hidden between its lines) than I can comprehend. #deep I enjoyed the mystery of it all and the choice of the metaphors applied. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JuJu Posted December 17, 2015 Author Share Posted December 17, 2015 Thank you ladies...this poem is definitely metaphorical in may ways...i like to write with a deeper meaning Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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