Oldlover Posted February 12, 2018 Share Posted February 12, 2018 Sticks and Stones A knife through the heart On a warm day Will your blood bleed warm? Ā A pain in your chest On a cold day Will your heart freeze over? Ā The words hang like rocks On a chain mail Will they pull you under? Ā If the words are pushed Through a knife in the heart Past your chain mail through your icy chest Will you survive? Ā Will you stop breathing? 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted February 12, 2018 Moderators Share Posted February 12, 2018 Very very nice!Ā šš½ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oldlover Posted February 12, 2018 Author Share Posted February 12, 2018 22 minutes ago, kimi said: Very very nice!Ā šš½ Thank you. Lol. Wasn't expecting anyone to read it. Almost a decade since I wrote poetry last. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oldlover Posted February 12, 2018 Author Share Posted February 12, 2018 Untitled Set my heart on your little finger Does it spin upright Held up by its own breaking Ā Does it call to your empty spaces Does sing to your broken dreams Does it plead to your better nature Ā Does it call Does it call Does it call for your mercy Where your mercy no longer lives Ā Does it sing Does it sing Does it sing to you to spare it When your sparing hears no more songs Ā Does it plead Does it plead Does it plead for your heartās mending Where mending means salvation Ā Set my heart on my little finger Watch it spin upright Held up by its own mending 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Txunamy Posted February 12, 2018 Share Posted February 12, 2018 Nice read @Oldlover āŗĀ 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oldlover Posted February 12, 2018 Author Share Posted February 12, 2018 Just now, Ivyy said: Nice read @Oldlover āŗĀ Thank you IvyyĀ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dipbluesae Posted February 12, 2018 Share Posted February 12, 2018 Beautiful good job!š 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oldlover Posted February 12, 2018 Author Share Posted February 12, 2018 15 minutes ago, DipBluSae said: Beautiful good job!š Thank you Dip š Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted February 12, 2018 Moderators Share Posted February 12, 2018 Me likey. šš½ 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oldlover Posted February 12, 2018 Author Share Posted February 12, 2018 4 minutes ago, kimi said: Me likey. šš½ Thank you š Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oldlover Posted February 12, 2018 Author Share Posted February 12, 2018 Help Me Forget (unfinished) Silky soft skin Warm to the touch Brown languid limbs Stretching as I watch Ā A black spot, a perfect blemish Lips that smile when you sleep And laugh when youāre shy Lips that part Ā Eyes that blink once When youāre surprised Twice when youāre aroused Ā Breasts that sway When you dance Hips that sway When you dance Ā I want to make you dance. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted February 13, 2018 Moderators Share Posted February 13, 2018 We've got loads of talents up in here... well done Oldlover. I enjoyed reading 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oldlover Posted February 13, 2018 Author Share Posted February 13, 2018 1 hour ago, kimi said: We've got loads of talents up in here... well done Oldlover. I enjoyed reading Thank you Kimi. I'm glad you enjoyed it.Ā Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dipbluesae Posted February 13, 2018 Share Posted February 13, 2018 11 hours ago, Oldlover said: Help Me Forget (unfinished) Silky soft skin Warm to the touch Brown languid limbs Stretching as I watch Ā A black spot, a perfect blemish Lips that smile when you sleep And laugh when youāre shy Lips that part Ā Eyes that blink once When youāre surprised Twice when youāre aroused Ā Breasts that sway When you dance Hips that sway When you dance Ā I want to make you dance. Beautifulš Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oldlover Posted February 13, 2018 Author Share Posted February 13, 2018 3 minutes ago, DipBluSae said: Beautifulš Thanks DipĀ 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dequeen Posted February 13, 2018 Share Posted February 13, 2018 These are lovely. Well written! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princesa Posted March 19, 2018 Share Posted March 19, 2018 On 2/12/2018 at 6:20 PM, Oldlover said: Sticks and Stones A knife through the heart On a warm day Will your blood bleed warm? Ā A pain in your chest On a cold day Will your heart freeze over? Ā The words hang like rocks On a chain mail Will they pull you under? Ā If the words are pushed Through a knife in the heart Past your chain mail through your icy chest Will you survive? Ā Will you stop breathing? Finally seen ur write up. Awesome 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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