Fummy Posted January 18, 2015 Share Posted January 18, 2015 Am sorry That is what I want to say Am sorry Am sorry I looked at you Am sorry I liked what I saw Am sorry I ever liked you Am sorry for everything Am sorry I stayed longer than I should have Enduring it all in the name of love Love for you came in the form of hurtful words n mistaken slaps Yes mistakes, that was what you called them and it was a continuous process. Am sorry I thought of forever and it scared you away Yes Am sorry Very sorry Am sorry I ended up loving you Yes I remember this wasn't our agreement Am sorry I made you love me Am sorry I made you insecure Am sorry I made you hit me You see I accept, I agree Ofcourse, it is always my fault If I didn't kiss you longer than I was supposed to If I didn't love you with everything I had Maybe, just maybe It wouldn't have happened Am sorry you broke up with me Am sorry I came back You see, I had no where to go You were a place I could always go to You loved me though wrongly, You still loved me and my soul depended on it Am sorry you slapped me I should have kept quiet, I shouldn't have argued with you. But I forgot Yes I did I forgot you were always right And you had to teach me a lesson. And what other way could I have learnt? Than ending up in the hospital with bruises all over my body. Its a pity though, people kept asking which part of my body hurts, they kept touching the parts that could heal but No one not even you talked about my bruised heart and soul. That which couldn't heal You came that day to say what we both knew It is your fault, I never could have done this to you. It is your fault we are both suffering.. That was what you said to me that day amidst tears.. Yes I didn't forget I could not forget I should have told you that day But you also didn't notice, maybe you should have because something died in me that day and its death brought about the birth of another emotion, that which isn't love. Emotional abuse that's what they called it but this was more than emotional, physical abuse, constantly living in fear of someone that's supposed to love, care for and support you that was like living in hell.. You were my hell but then afterwards albeit a short while you would show me the taste of heaven but even that was unreal. So I reached out Because I knew I couldn't have done it on my own You were like a small god, a very reactive substance, quick to anger and slow to forgive. Am sorry I reached out Am sorry I found help in the arms of a beautiful woman. Am sorry I walked away Am sorry but I tried, I really did try but she offered love to my bleeding heart which she stitched up. To my lifeless soul, she offered life. And I took it, with both hands and held onto it. Am sorry With you I will always be sorry With her it was different She taught me I didn't have to apologise for everything, especially when it wasn't my fault... Am no longer with her but am a better person now. I don't live in fear anymore I know that I have to love myself and I know that my happiness doesn't depend on anybody. I saw your message on whatsapp You said you love me? Lol, how funny You held that from me when that was all I needed to feel alive. Now I have a voice A voice that wants to be heard A voice that can be heard Now people ask for my opinion and I give it confidently without fear or the need to always apologise.. In your message, you said you want me as I am now? =D Your breed can never afford the lady I have grown to become. The lady that can and will never stoop so low to make the same mistake her childish self made.. I wish you the best and once again, AM SORRY Note: Found this in my 'writing book' and decided to share.. Lol it didn't necessarily happen to me, I just want to speak out against any form of abuse or violence in relationships and what better way would I have achieved that than living 'it' in my mind... Please stop any form of violence, love should bring life, peace and joy to your heart not war or fear.. If you are in a relationship where your significant other constantly hits you then maybe its time to think about it again, is this what you want? Is this what you feel you deserve? Nope, NO I do not believe we can only fall in love once, I do not believe there's only one person capable of truly being in love with us in our lifetime. At the end of the day, its your life and yours alone. Please live it well. Thanks for reading :) 1 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iris Posted January 18, 2015 Share Posted January 18, 2015 Lol. I love this poem. Did u compose it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 18, 2015 Author Share Posted January 18, 2015 Lol. I love this poem. Did u compose it? Lol *blushing* yes I did.. Wrote it sometime last year, lol thanks again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mifled Posted January 18, 2015 Share Posted January 18, 2015 Lovely piece....my heart reaches out to women going thru such. Such acts should be deterred. @Fummy u rock with this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gracia Posted January 18, 2015 Share Posted January 18, 2015 this is pretty good and quite funny..thumbs up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 18, 2015 Author Share Posted January 18, 2015 Lovely piece....my heart reaches out to women going thru such. Such acts should be deterred. @Fummy u rock with this Hehehehe thanks benumbed. I feel bad for anyone going through domestic abuse, most times it ends up in death.. Its very sad really, don't hold on to someone that can't control his or her temper/words/hands from hitting or inflicting pain on you... Nobody is worth dying for and those that are actually worth dying for wouldn't cause your death.... You aren't Jesus except you are donating your organs, your death won't save lives.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 18, 2015 Author Share Posted January 18, 2015 this is pretty good and quite funny..thumbs up Thanks Bliss, am glad you enjoyed reading it :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators moresko Posted January 19, 2015 Moderators Share Posted January 19, 2015 Love, love, love, love it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skills Posted January 19, 2015 Share Posted January 19, 2015 very .very.very.very NICE!.......weldone gurl! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 19, 2015 Author Share Posted January 19, 2015 Love, love, love, love it. Wow, thanks for reading and loving it... :) \=D/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 19, 2015 Author Share Posted January 19, 2015 very .very.very.very NICE!.......weldone gurl! SLEEKY! Thanks, thanks and thanks again.... My head is 'bigging' sef :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 19, 2015 Author Share Posted January 19, 2015 very .very.very.very NICE!.......weldone gurl! SLEEKY! Thanks, thanks and thanks again.... My head is 'bigging' sef :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daftpunk Posted January 19, 2015 Share Posted January 19, 2015 Nice poem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrators FlyJ Posted January 20, 2015 Administrators Share Posted January 20, 2015 Very nice. Well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milad Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 Very nicely done. Going thru a break up now but its refreshing when you can stamp out bullshyters fast isnt it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Missmart Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 Wow!.. i love this!...well, Am sorry for reading it twice...please forgive me...Am really sorry! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iris Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 Wow!.. i love this!...well, Am sorry for reading it twice...please forgive me...Am really sorry! Lol yes, I read it again too and again. I could only read the first few lines as I was ironing the first time I saw it. But I knew I loved it already. There’s something about the way it was written. I love the tone, mood and VERY subtle sarcasm. The first two lines killed it for me... “Am sorry. That is what I want to say...”. My other favourite lines are: “Am sorry I made you hit me. You see. I accept, I agree” “I should have kept quiet, I shouldn’t have argued with you. But I forgot. Yes I did”. “Am sorry. With you I will always be sorry”. I really love this poem. Even at its length, the writer didn’t stray in creativity one bit. And the lines are not ambiguous, not boring. They are like a story and not some make-believe words striving for rhymes. You know those kinds we write. This is the kind of poem that should be in the dailies. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hipstar Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 i'm sorry i thought u were talkn bou urself i'm sorry i almost started to reach for my cell to call and console your broken heart thereafter go and kick his battered ass lol thumbs up babes, it is thought provoking, speaking to d conscience. some one go tell my ex to come read dis Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abystacy Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 Nicely written.... I enjoyed it.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dequeen Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 Fantastic piece! I savoured it! well done!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 21, 2015 Author Share Posted January 21, 2015 Nice poem. Thanks Daftpunk :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 21, 2015 Author Share Posted January 21, 2015 Nice poem. Thanks Daftpunk :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 21, 2015 Author Share Posted January 21, 2015 Very nice. Well done! Thanks FlyJ :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 21, 2015 Author Share Posted January 21, 2015 Very nicely done. Going thru a break up now but its refreshing when you can stamp out bullshyters fast isnt it? Yeah its very refreshing when you kick them out fast... Am sorry about your breakup dear but its her loss not yours *hugs* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 21, 2015 Author Share Posted January 21, 2015 Wow!.. i love this!...well, Am sorry for reading it twice...please forgive me...Am really sorry! :lol: hehehe thanks Shalo, so who do I apologise to as well...LOL please read again n again n whenever you want to, thanks for reading :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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