Fummy Posted January 21, 2015 Author Share Posted January 21, 2015 Lol yes, I read it again too and again. I could only read the first few lines as I was ironing the first time I saw it. But I knew I loved it already. There’s something about the way it was written. I love the tone, mood and VERY subtle sarcasm. The first two lines killed it for me... “Am sorry. That is what I want to say...”. My other favourite lines are: “Am sorry I made you hit me. You see. I accept, I agree” “I should have kept quiet, I shouldn’t have argued with you. But I forgot. Yes I did”. “Am sorry. With you I will always be sorry”. I really love this poem. Even at its length, the writer didn’t stray in creativity one bit. And the lines are not ambiguous, not boring. They are like a story and not some make-believe words striving for rhymes. You know those kinds we write. This is the kind of poem that should be in the dailies. Thanks Iris once again, thanks for such kind words :D ...... I should frame this comments but I will just have them ingrained in my mind Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 21, 2015 Author Share Posted January 21, 2015 i'm sorry i thought u were talkn bou urself i'm sorry i almost started to reach for my cell to call and console your broken heart thereafter go and kick his battered ass lol thumbs up babes, it is thought provoking, speaking to d conscience. some one go tell my ex to come read dis Loooooooll hahaha thanks dear nope it didn't happen to me, give me her number let's deal with her :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 21, 2015 Author Share Posted January 21, 2015 Nicely written.... I enjoyed it.. Thanks Abystacy :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted January 21, 2015 Author Share Posted January 21, 2015 Fantastic piece! I savoured it! well done!! Thanks Dee :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hipstar Posted January 21, 2015 Share Posted January 21, 2015 Loooooooll hahaha thanks dear nope it didn't happen to me, give me her number let's deal with her :lol:/> hahahha lmao.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawken Posted March 25, 2015 Share Posted March 25, 2015 Beautiful.. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
msztee Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 Nice.. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VINA Posted October 22, 2018 Share Posted October 22, 2018 Poem of life. Touches the very soul... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted October 22, 2018 Author Share Posted October 22, 2018 1 hour ago, vina said: Poem of life. Touches the very soul... Thanks babe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VINA Posted October 22, 2018 Share Posted October 22, 2018 1 hour ago, Fummy said: Thanks babe Write more ehhh. Biko Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChazBee Posted October 22, 2018 Share Posted October 22, 2018 I read this over and over again Then I paused to check the writer's name, it tells my story though I haven't got the courage to tell it myself, but this was me for a very long time but I grew up and realized my worth. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VINA Posted October 22, 2018 Share Posted October 22, 2018 2 hours ago, ChazBee said: I read this over and over again Then I paused to check the writer's name, it tells my story though I haven't got the courage to tell it myself, but this was me for a very long time but I grew up and realized my worth. Awww. When you do get the courage please tell your story so others can learn and trust me, you will feel better once you let it off your chest. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted October 22, 2018 Moderators Share Posted October 22, 2018 A beautiful beautiful poem... I'm coming across it for the first time. I know what abuse is and I also know it leaves behind a shame that often stops you from recounting the tale to another even when you were strong enough to walk away. In your own time Chaz... good on you that you walked away. That's worth celebrating. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChazBee Posted October 22, 2018 Share Posted October 22, 2018 2 hours ago, vina said: Awww. When you do get the courage please tell your story so others can learn and trust me, you will feel better once you let it off your chest. I sure will babe, have started too many times but never had the kinda nerves I need. I hope I'll get the courage to tell it in this lifetime Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted October 22, 2018 Moderators Share Posted October 22, 2018 2 hours ago, ChazBee said: I sure will babe, have started too many times but never had the kinda nerves I need. I hope I'll get the courage to tell it in this lifetime Hugs.... it must have broken you. Good thing you found the strength to walk away Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VINA Posted October 23, 2018 Share Posted October 23, 2018 10 hours ago, ChazBee said: I sure will babe, have started too many times but never had the kinda nerves I need. I hope I'll get the courage to tell it in this lifetime XOXO babe.. We care. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MENA Posted October 23, 2018 Share Posted October 23, 2018 @Fummy this is wonderful share! And mean while where have you been?😁 This made me go back to memory lane to see if l have been abused in anyway and l did remembered the only girl that did hit me a few times was my secondary school babe because she was too jealous to a fault. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MENA Posted October 23, 2018 Share Posted October 23, 2018 On 10/22/2018 at 3:12 PM, ChazBee said: I read this over and over again Then I paused to check the writer's name, it tells my story though I haven't got the courage to tell it myself, but this was me for a very long time but I grew up and realized my worth. Babe my heart goes out for you.🤗 I will encourage you to just try and just share it. It will help you a great deal. It's a good therapy to heal wounds. Just start any how. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChazBee Posted October 23, 2018 Share Posted October 23, 2018 3 hours ago, MENA said: Babe my heart goes out for you.🤗 I will encourage you to just try and just share it. It will help you a great deal. It's a good therapy to heal wounds. Just start any how. I'll try soon, maybe break it into chapters, I don't know yet but I'll figure it out. Thanks so much 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChazBee Posted October 23, 2018 Share Posted October 23, 2018 13 hours ago, vina said: XOXO babe.. We care. Thank dearie, I appreciate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChazBee Posted October 23, 2018 Share Posted October 23, 2018 21 hours ago, kimi said: Hugs.... it must have broken you. Good thing you found the strength to walk away I really did but God got me. Thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dipbluesae Posted November 4, 2018 Share Posted November 4, 2018 I was so sad reading this.. Sorry to whoever is going through this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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