dequeen Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 Am really shy, you just dont know it yet . and am not proud of it, but i do get tired of acting bold. My mind speaks volumes, my lips say niente! i walk away because my heart is too faint, not because am without a heart. i cant say no, its a weakness, i know, but its because i cant bear to see a heart break. i want to be open, i do, but if am open you'll never for once give me the benefit of a doubt. Everyone ave hurt, i never meant to. Everyone that hurt me, I forgave. Am confused most times, would you blame me? Every decision in my life was made for me. I never had to lift a finger, I just had to pout my lips. The pillars were always there, I never learnt to stand on my own, why would I? I grew naive but where am from, naivety is piousness , it is holiness. I am not disrespectful, you just don't understand my tone. Am not stubborn, you just haven't found my spot. am not flirtatious, you just don't understand my stare and the way I play with my hair? its when am lost in thought. You don't understand me, you never did and perhaps you never will but please read between this lines and see this girl pleading with you to understand her, to understand her intentions, to understand her decisions. Do you see me crying between the lines? Do you see me clinging to love on this lines? Do you see the pain in my heart? Do you understand? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
divabj Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 I think ds person will actually see you like u want her to after ds write up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dreamgal Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 awww Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawken Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 Who knew Dequeen could be this... poetic? Good good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fummy Posted June 21, 2015 Share Posted June 21, 2015 Heheheheehehehe wow .... I love this ... This is beautiful really... Well if she can't see it, me I can see the love inbetween the lines.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrators FlyJ Posted June 21, 2015 Administrators Share Posted June 21, 2015 Very well written! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modd Posted October 17, 2015 Share Posted October 17, 2015 nice... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted October 17, 2015 Moderators Share Posted October 17, 2015 Welcome Welcome 'Modd' :) Newbie of 25/09/15. We noticed *wink* If you'd like, you could do a short introduction of yourself in the "introduce yourself -tell us something interesting about yourself' column. Good to have you here! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted October 17, 2015 Moderators Share Posted October 17, 2015 "I am not disrespectful, you just don't understand my tone. Am not stubborn, you just haven't found my spot. am not flirtatious, you just don't understand my stare and the way I play with my hair?" That's got to be my favourite portion of your poem. #perspectives Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fairy Posted October 17, 2015 Share Posted October 17, 2015 wow! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
relangel Posted October 17, 2015 Share Posted October 17, 2015 Waoh that's good dequeen . . . quite an outpour of genuiness Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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