fairy Posted June 19, 2016 Share Posted June 19, 2016 Her uneven hands roamed her face as day thinned A perfect cover for our guilty pleasures Like rats after the dearly beloved cheese we snuck Daytime friends and nighttime lovers. I saw you bend over at church today Not like the time I stroked your behind Your eyes were shut to our guilt As you counted beads, I counted minutes. "The body is God's temple" our old Reverend preached Oh I remember how many several times In your temple I worshiped Until shaking violently, you spoke in tongues. "Now the day is over" the choir sang You didn't know I saw you peek And you don't know tonight I'll ask "Choose between the cloak or me." _Blackfairy 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawken Posted June 19, 2016 Share Posted June 19, 2016 And shes back!!!!!! And its with a good one!!! Wait is this the poem you promjsed Kimi? :unsure: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fairy Posted June 19, 2016 Author Share Posted June 19, 2016 Haha yup. But it's got nothing to do with her, or you or me. Lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted June 19, 2016 Moderators Share Posted June 19, 2016 Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwh!!! Fairy is back back back! How I've missed this so! You write ever so beautifully my darling! I adore your pieces. Welcome back love "Take her to church" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fairy Posted June 19, 2016 Author Share Posted June 19, 2016 Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwh!!! Fairy is back back back! How I've missed this so! You write ever so beautifully my darling! I adore your pieces. Welcome back love "Take her to church" Haha! Thanks ma'am. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fairy Posted June 19, 2016 Author Share Posted June 19, 2016 I'm not seeing any titles ladies! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted June 19, 2016 Moderators Share Posted June 19, 2016 *Take her to church* was my first suggestion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fairy Posted June 19, 2016 Author Share Posted June 19, 2016 *Take her to church* was my first suggestion. What's the reason behind this title? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted June 19, 2016 Moderators Share Posted June 19, 2016 Hahahaha Jamb question o. Errr... since both your bodies are temples, and the poem was cast in the setting a church, I figured I could do a pun with the title. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fairy Posted June 19, 2016 Author Share Posted June 19, 2016 Haha. But how can I take her to church when apparently she's a nun? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted June 19, 2016 Moderators Share Posted June 19, 2016 Hahahahaha! I see... that's the missing piece. I'd keep shopping for titles Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fairy Posted June 20, 2016 Author Share Posted June 20, 2016 Lol Okay ma'am. Good luck shopping. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princesa Posted June 20, 2016 Share Posted June 20, 2016 beautiful write up dear... As for title "I should stop staring" <_< Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fairy Posted June 20, 2016 Author Share Posted June 20, 2016 beautiful write up dear... As for title "I should stop staring" <_</> Lmao. Stop staring please unless you want a threesome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted June 22, 2016 Moderators Share Posted June 22, 2016 What of "guilty pleasures"? Or "Dusk bid me come" or perhaps "all shades of wrong" :D What of "on-holy sanctuary" I half tried! :unsure: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fairy Posted June 22, 2016 Author Share Posted June 22, 2016 You know I like this "on-holy" word... Its a good title... quite catchy. On-holy! I love it!! Thanks Cummings Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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