Keke Posted March 19, 2018 Share Posted March 19, 2018 25nd April 2013 Doc is becoming pettier by the day. Yesterday, she had overheard me compliment a colleague’s makeup in the hallway. Today I noticed she had gone a step further than lipstick. Her eyebrows were plucked and defined, she had a little powder on and some blush. “Makeup looks very good on you,” I said when had time to ourselves. “Really?” She asked looking up at me. I could see how pleased she was. I wanted to hold her. I wish I could make her look that way everyday for the rest of her life. I love this woman! “Yes. You look very beautiful; your facial features are perfect. By the time you become a makeup pro, you will make men drive into each other if you decide to take a stroll”. “What about you?” she asked, “will I make you drive into anyone?” I looked her over and smiled. 4th May 2013 I woke up to the beep of my phone this morning. That was some six minutes past Nine. It was Doc. “Ego, do you have any plans for today? The Wii system I ordered just came in. I need to try it out with someone”. What the hell is a Wii system? I did not bother asking. Doc wants me in her house. That’s the message. I got her address and rushed into the bathroom. Wii turned out to be a game console complete with VR video games for fitness. She wanted us to do the dance revolution. My first proper date! Dear diary, I am not a fan of rigorous dance, but I really had fun today. I watched her every time she faulted in any particular dance move, how she would throw her head back and laugh. Sometimes she held me to keep from tripping and when I had more points, she feigned annoyance. To me, relationships always started and ended with sex. This feels different. I've never felt this way before. After about 45 minutes of dancing and sweating, we were exhausted. I had my bath and changed into some cloths she had laid out while she heated up some leftover food for brunch. When I was done getting dressed, she got in the shower as I looked through some books in her impressive bookcase. I like that she is a vast reader. It was a while before I realised the shower had stopped running. I looked up and there she was, the woman of my dreams standing in all her glory. “The things a warm bath can do to your muscles,” she said as she walked across the room to sit on the edge of her bed. “Amazing, but not as amazing as an actual kneading would be.” I smiled in agreement. I refused to take a cue. “Well, I am sure you know one or two things about massaging,” Doc urged on. I was scared that if I moved, the wetness between my legs would be like a woman whose water broke. Somehow, I got to the bed. She lay face down and I shifted the towel to her lower back and began to knead that perfect body. She didn’t stifle her moans. The sound was beautiful to my ears. The towel was not there anymore, I do not know how. I only know that touching those beautiful legs almost brought tears to my eyes. Doc turned around to lie on her back and pulled me down to a warm kiss. My hand strayed to her breast. They were fuller than I had imagined. I played with her nipples and finally took one in my mouth. She let out a gasp, then a whimper that spurred me on. I kiss her as my hands found the paradise between her legs. Such wetness. I wondered what she would taste like. I got off Doc and positioned myself between her legs. I caressed every part of her bud, admiring the rich contrast between her dark skin and her pink inner labia. I wanted to feel that p**sy on mine, but I didn’t think she was ready for all that. It was not about me today. With my lips covered her clitoris, she gave another whimper and held my head, muttering sweet nothings. I like to watch the contracting of a vagina during orgasm. When I noticed she was getting there, I pulled out my head from her grasp and continued with my finger, pulling the labia covering the clit back with my left hand, I worked with the right index finger and watched until she came. It was beautiful; I don’t know which was more, the expression on her face or her pulsating vagina. I kissed her bud then her inner thighs until they didn't tremble any more. We've been all over each other the whole day. As I write this, I watch her sleep. I know I am in trouble. Eventually, the reality of our society dawns on us. It always does. I can't be selfish. I would let her remarry if she wanted and have a family. We might still be lovers, but I know I will always be second place. I am real big trouble, one I do not regret. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawken Posted March 19, 2018 Share Posted March 19, 2018 Well.. Thanks for letting them have sex. I thought you wouldn't. It was good stuff. Sad its ending. ps the sex scene was extremely realistic. I like how you didn't try to pornograph it. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted March 19, 2018 Moderators Share Posted March 19, 2018 Lol. Interesting... I saw this coming although I was hoping it wouldn't end in sex. I was hoping for more of a cliffhanger, such that you left the rest to our imagination. I was hoping for more depth in the events leading up to their first kiss... (silently hoping it ended in a passionate first kiss) I enjoyed the characters and this is my very first detailed review about any piece ever posted on NL. Lol. That's how much I liked your characters. It's a good thing Well done... I enjoyed your style of writing. PS - I don't enjoy reading erotica so much. Lol. (Hence my views). It just seems very cliché and serves as a reminder of the relationship patterns that prevail within the community that I'm not so much a fan of. Kudos really. 👏🏽 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dipbluesae Posted March 19, 2018 Share Posted March 19, 2018 6 minutes ago, kimi said: Lol. Interesting... I saw this coming although I was hoping it wouldn't end in sex. I was hoping for more of a cliffhanger, such that you left the rest to our imagination. I was hoping for more depth in the events leading up to their first kiss... (silently hoping it ended in a passionate first kiss) I enjoyed the characters and this is my very first detailed review about any piece ever posted on NL. Lol. That's how much I liked your characters. It's a good thing Well done... I enjoy your style of writing. PS - I don't enjoy reading erotica so much. Lol. (Hence my views). It just seems very cliché and serves as a reminder of the relationship patterns that prevail within the community that I'm not so much a fan of. Kudos really. 👏🏽 me too! All in all good job Keke!👍 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Txunamy Posted March 19, 2018 Share Posted March 19, 2018 Very neat.. Like I said in the first entry, this is a break from the norm, a breath of fresh air.. ☺ Well-done keke. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keke Posted March 19, 2018 Author Share Posted March 19, 2018 1 hour ago, Hawken said: Well.. Thanks for letting them have sex. I thought you wouldn't. Me and sex scenes are five and six. No way i was going to let that slip Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keke Posted March 19, 2018 Author Share Posted March 19, 2018 1 hour ago, Hawken said: Well.. Thanks for letting them have sex. I thought you wouldn't. It was good stuff. Sad its ending. ps the sex scene was extremely realistic. I like how you didn't try to pornograph it. Thank you. I prefer to keep off phonographic methods when i am not writing solely based on lust Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keke Posted March 19, 2018 Author Share Posted March 19, 2018 1 hour ago, kimi said: Lol. Interesting... I saw this coming although I was hoping it wouldn't end in sex. I was hoping for more of a cliffhanger, such that you left the rest to our imagination. I was hoping for more depth in the events leading up to their first kiss... (silently hoping it ended in a passionate first kiss) I enjoyed the characters and this is my very first detailed review about any piece ever posted on NL. Lol. That's how much I liked your characters. It's a good thing Well done... I enjoyed your style of writing. PS - I don't enjoy reading erotica so much. Lol. (Hence my views). It just seems very cliché and serves as a reminder of the relationship patterns that prevail within the community that I'm not so much a fan of. Kudos really. 👏🏽 Thanks @kimi Chimamanda killed my love for cliff-hangers when she left whatever happened to Kainene to our imaginations in Half of a yellow sun. I've not forgiven her still. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators kimi Posted March 19, 2018 Moderators Share Posted March 19, 2018 1 hour ago, Keke said: Thanks @kimi Chimamanda killed my love for cliff-hangers when she left whatever happened to Kainene to our imaginations in Half of a yellow sun. I've not forgiven her still. Hahahaha. Classic Chimamanda style. It's one of the things I enjoy about her stories. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChazBee Posted March 19, 2018 Share Posted March 19, 2018 Very nice job, though the first kiss was kinda expected but the sex scene is very realistic. I've loved the story from beginning, sad it's ending. Well done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawken Posted March 20, 2018 Share Posted March 20, 2018 16 hours ago, Keke said: Me and sex scenes are five and six. No way i was going to let that slip 😆 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VINA Posted March 20, 2018 Share Posted March 20, 2018 The sex came way too soon. I wish the build up would have been longer and even more passionate. and i already had lube in hand, with my vibrator waiting for the amazing over the top sex (i like erotica and i get off from reading sex!!) but you had to go and make it soooooo normal!!! Pheww!! No pulling of hair, dirty nasty talking, or other vixen mating shiiit. I wanted to see the animal in doc, let her loose control and be wild.. #sighs. A girl has to take what shes offered i guess. Great work. I should stop being so crass and emulate your neat writing pattern at least once.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiee Posted March 20, 2018 Share Posted March 20, 2018 Aww ended too soon. Well done Keke! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mimy Posted March 20, 2018 Share Posted March 20, 2018 Pulling of hair? Hian! Now I know why some people are bald. Interesting read. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keke Posted March 20, 2018 Author Share Posted March 20, 2018 3 minutes ago, Gimbiyya said: Pulling of hair? Hian! Now I know why some people are bald. Interesting read. Oh, so you know the bald person and you also know the hair puller. Mehn I love this kinda gossip Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mimy Posted March 20, 2018 Share Posted March 20, 2018 2 hours ago, Keke said: Oh, so you know the bald person and you also know the hair puller. Mehn I love this kinda gossip Hahahah I didn't say anything 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hipstar Posted April 5, 2018 Share Posted April 5, 2018 On 3/19/2018 at 1:17 PM, Hawken said: Well.. Thanks for letting them have sex. I thought you wouldn't. It was good stuff. Sad its ending. ps the sex scene was extremely realistic. I like how you didn't try to pornograph it. Lmao.. I swear I'd have had an out burst if they didn't Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hipstar Posted April 5, 2018 Share Posted April 5, 2018 This is like the realest piece I've read.. are you sure this is fiction? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keke Posted April 8, 2018 Author Share Posted April 8, 2018 On 4/5/2018 at 10:09 AM, Hipstar said: This is like the realest piece I've read.. are you sure this is fiction? Lol! Amebo people everywhere Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moncheri Posted September 24, 2018 Share Posted September 24, 2018 Nicely done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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